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I'm going to tell you some different types of sentences we have learned form Hur3-writing. We have learnt adverb start, w-start, very short sentence and more. I'll be talking about the adverb start sentences first. A adverb start sentences is a sentences that start with a verb. I'll give you two examples:
1.Nervously I waited for a week to see how the beef jerky was doing.
2.Happy I waited for a week to eat some beef jerky.
The second type of sentences I'll call you is w-start. W-start sentences is a sentences that start with a word that start with a w. I'll give you two examples
When I taked a bite out of the beef jerky, I almost throw up.
When I touch the beef jerky, It feel so dry.
The third one is the very short sentences. I'll give you an example
When i take a bite yuck.
I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, 16 March 2020
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Hi Ken, These adverbs add so much to your sentences! I really understand how you felt waiting for the beef to cure. Thanks for taking the time to post this for others to read. Keep up the good work on your science and writing!!
ReplyDeleteHi Ken
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your science sentences, I can see you have a pretty good understanding of the W-Start and Adverb start we have been working on. I would like you to have another look at #2 on Adverb start... is "happy" an adverb? What do you need to change on "happy" to make it an adverb?
- Miss Birtch