I'm going to share my hotspot for week 6 with you. In hotspot week 6 we have to write a inspired story of a picture. The picture that I my story is inspired by is this. By the way I'm not finished yet.
This is my unfinished hotspot for week 6
Come on come on am almost finished this quest. The service about to shut down I need to Hurry up and finish this quest before the game shuts down. I give up I can’t finish this in time. 30 more seconds until the game shuts down 30 29 28 27 26 25 24 23 22 21 20 19 18 17 16 15 14 13 12 11 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1….What the were am I and where did the nature come from I was in my room. And whats on my leg wait a minute am sure that I didn’t have a knife on my leg! And am sure I wasn’t wearing this apocalypse clothes too! Wait a minute my character had a knife on has leg and had this clothes on. I saw a lake I crawled to it I look at my reflection that’s my characters face!! THIS MUST BE A DREAM!!! Then I pinched my face to make sure that I was in a dream. Ouch that hurts this is not a dream, am I trapped in a game!?!?! I got up then got a map from my packet yes I know that I would have a map in my packet. This map tells were you are oh no am in the forest of death this is bad but am not too far away from the exit. I started to walk to the direction to go and leave this place. I should be careful because the forest of death kills anyone that goes too far in. even if your not to deep in the forest there is a chance you’ll die because if your to weak you will die from the monsters. (Branch breaking nose) I looked at branch that broke oh no a monster sees me. I started to run to a tree I got my knife out then jumped to a tree and stab it then let go of it and put my feet on it and jump again there am on the tree. I got my pistol out and shoot the monster in head it fell down like a unbalanced statue. Yes am safe for now…. 1 hour of walking later finally am out of there now I need to go to the The capital which is going to take 5 days to get there on feet. A day of walking later it’s so hot It feels like am going to melt like a ice cream in a hot day. Whats that sound behind me I looked behind then I saw a cart yessss am saved. When I saw the cart I said stop please it stoped I said can I ride on your cart all the way to the capital please. Sorry but I can’t go there it’s too dangerous he said what? I said you don’t know about the attack he said what attack? I said. He said everything he know about the attack. He said that a enemy country went to the capital so they could take over the strongest place in the country. He also said that today some people are going to the capital to retake the capital. But can you just put me by the capital I said then he said sure 2 hours of riding on the cart. Finally we here I said I got out of the cart and The first thing I saw was a giant wall with a half broken gate. I saw the other people that was here to retake the capital. Should I help or don’t help I’ll help them retake it. One by one they went inside the wall I got ready and ran after them. I went through the gate I looked to my left uh no there’s a sniper. I looked around to see if there’s any broken wall to Protect me. Yes I see a broken wall. I ran to I had to keep on moving or am dead, yes I got to the wall.
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