I'm going to share my collaborative writing. In collaborative writing we are learning what language features are and how to use them. In collaborative for last last week we learn the feature hyperbole. Hyperbole means when are being exaggerating or being dramatic. After we learned what hyperbole means we made a hyperbole poem.
This is my one
My room
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My room was so messy it looks like it Been through a war.
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My room so hot it boiled the water in my room.
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My room was so cold it made the water into ice in a matter of seconds.
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My room was so big it could hold 6 full grown elephants.
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My bed was so big that it could hold 10 adults
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My shelf is so big that it could hold 500.000 Toy figures
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My cabinet is so small that it can’t even hold a ant
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My bed is so high up that I needed a ladder to get on it
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