I'm going to share my collaborative writing with you. We have been learning onomatopoeia. onomatopoeia means a word that describes a sound. Also onomatopoeia is a language feature. A language feature is something special or different made with words. We have been making ideas into sentences that have some onomatopoeia in it.
This is my one
- The guides in the high-vis jackets telling the kids where they are supposed to stand-
- The starting gun made a loud crack sound
- The feet of of the other racers hitting the ground made a lightly thudding sound.
- I started to sprint like lightning
- The commentator saying things
- My heart beating
The guides in the high-vis jackets put me where I was supposed to stand. The loud crack sound of the starting gun made me and the other races start the races. I could hear the feet of the other races making a lightly thudding sound. But not for long because I started sprinting like lightning. I could hear the commentator saying things. My hearts was beating so fast I started slowing down.
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