Weekly Word

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I'm going to share my weekly words with you. In weekly words we have to guess what the word means. Then we have to go to https://www.vocabulary.com/dictionary/Inspired to find out what it means. Then we have to write our own sentence.   



This is my one

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My collaborative writing

Hi everyone welcome back to my blog,

I'm going to share my collaborative writing with you. In collaborative writing we have been learning to know what language features and how to use them. The language features am learning about is Personification. personification is an object that is using human feelings and actions in writing.

This is my one

The strong wind whooshed and roared around the paralyzed tree as it fall down the mountain. snow fell down like tears as the snow storm roared. The lightning storm struck the trees with rage and the avalanche smashed and slammed with anger. All the trees in it’s way broke.      

• Broken trees-sadness,pained,alone,helpless- crying, paralyzed,falling,tt   
• Snow storm- sadness,anger-crying,falling,roared  
• Lightning storm- anger- striking trees with lightning, 
• Avalanche- anger - collapse, running, fast, smashing, slamming, falling 

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