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Tuesday, 26 October 2021

Persuasive Writing

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I'm going to share what we have been doing for hur3. In hur3 we have been doing persuasive writing. The meaning of persuasive writing is a form of writing in which the writer uses words to convince the reader that the writer's opinion is correct. The topic that we writing about is if fire works should be banned.

Here is my persuasive writing.

Why I Think Fireworks Should Be Banned


Do you like fireworks? Of course, you do! But do you know how dangerous they can be?


Firstly they can be very dangerous to people, animals and the environment. If they go wrong they can burn the grass around them and cause fires or even kill or injure people or animals. If they go off track and go into some dead grass it could end up starting a big fire. it can also damage Property.


Secondly, they are annoying when you try to sleep and the noise can also shock animals and sometimes make them hurt themselves. The noise can also damage your hearing and sometimes you can go deaf.  


Lastly, If you mess up you could end up hurting yourself or someone else that is close by. You can burn yourself or could damage your eyesight which could lead to you being blind. It could also make animals go blind due to it being too bright. If your curtains are bad then the light from the fireworks could brighten up your room and keep you awake. 


Because of these reasons i believe that fireworks should be banned


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