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Tuesday, 26 October 2021

Persuasive Writing

 Hi everyone welcome to my blog,

I'm going to share what we have been doing for hur3. In hur3 we have been doing persuasive writing. The meaning of persuasive writing is a form of writing in which the writer uses words to convince the reader that the writer's opinion is correct. The topic that we writing about is if fire works should be banned.

Here is my persuasive writing.

Why I Think Fireworks Should Be Banned


Do you like fireworks? Of course, you do! But do you know how dangerous they can be?


Firstly they can be very dangerous to people, animals and the environment. If they go wrong they can burn the grass around them and cause fires or even kill or injure people or animals. If they go off track and go into some dead grass it could end up starting a big fire. it can also damage Property.


Secondly, they are annoying when you try to sleep and the noise can also shock animals and sometimes make them hurt themselves. The noise can also damage your hearing and sometimes you can go deaf.  


Lastly, If you mess up you could end up hurting yourself or someone else that is close by. You can burn yourself or could damage your eyesight which could lead to you being blind. It could also make animals go blind due to it being too bright. If your curtains are bad then the light from the fireworks could brighten up your room and keep you awake. 


Because of these reasons i believe that fireworks should be banned


Tuesday, 19 October 2021

Holiday Blog

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I'm going to share what we have been doing in the holidays. What I have been doing in the holiday is this: One of socials actives, is going to the movies with my dad at the cinema and I also talked to my friends. I also did some exercise at home. I did lots of reading in the holiday. One of the things that I liked doing in the holiday was watching you tube. In the holidays I was feeling a nice and good.The future of the cinema experience - Dasym, a research-driven investment  firm

Friday, 1 October 2021

Learning story

 Hi everyone welcome to my blog,

I'm going to share what we have been doing for hur1. In hur1 we have been doing learning stories.

This is my one

My Learning Story

Hurumanu: 1

Module: 

Name: Ken

Teacher: Dst

Term: 3

 

Reflection:

Give at least three examples in each of the boxes below.

What We Did: 

  •  In hur1 we did narrative writing

  • We also did planing for my story

  • We made the setting in my story

What I Learned: 

  • I learned how to plan my story

  • I also learned about Paralympians

  • I also learned more about new vocab

My Favourite Parts:

  • One of my favorite things I did is planing my story

  • I also liked doing the Paralympians doc 

  • I also liked doing the Lockdown Scavenger Hunt

My Next Steps:

  •  To not talk too much with my friends

  • To complete my work on time

  • And to focus on my work


CARR Values: 

Make a statement below describing how you showed each of our CARR values during this Hurumanu.

Commitment

I’m committed to my work

Achievement

I do my work to the best of my ability

Resilience

I do not give up easily

Respect

I respect my classmates