We have been learning how to describe when we are writing a narrative.
To have a good describing sentence we tried to use all the five census. Also to make a describe sentence you need to changed the I to a the.
I'll show you what is a difference between of a telling and a describe.
This is a telling sentence.
I had a map.
This is a describing sentence.
The map was dirty and with faded spots on it.
Also I'm going to share my writing work with you, this is my one.
Find five things related to the senses to describe in this image. Start each one with ‘The…’
1.The dark blue sea created a colossal dangerous wave.
2.The lightning was noisy and fast.
3.The dark cloud ravaged the sky.
4.The thunder was loud and horrifying.
5.The freezing air blasted me.
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