I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Ken.I like the background you have chosen.I like how the colours blend.I did find it difficult to read your sentences.You wrote about a parapet being a low wall along a roof.Would you find something like a wall by a roof?.I look forward to hearing from you.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Helpful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hi Ken.I like the background you have chosen.I like how the colours blend.I did find it difficult to read your sentences.You wrote about a parapet being a low wall along a roof.Would you find something like a wall by a roof?.I look forward to hearing from you.
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