I'm going to share my hotspot writing with you. This is just for today. I hope you enjoy it.
This is my one
A Dream
“Mum do I have to go to sleep” I said.
“Yes you do have to” mum said. I went on my bed and Starting to go to sleep. I heard something I open my eyes “oh my goodness” I said I saw something on my bedroom wall. It’s eyes was red and it’s Skin was all black. I got out of my bed and ran to my mum and dad room. I tried to open the door but it was lock I went to the door to go outside but it was lock. I grabbed my baseball bat and hit the window but it didn't crack. I looked behind me It was right there. Then I wake up I was sweating a lot I could not move for minutes.
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