In my topic we are making a poster. The poster that we are making is abound The engineering design process.
this is my poster
I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Helpful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Hi my name Samuel I like how it was way really colorful but you can make it by not adding so much 'now's'. It is kind of like mine.
ReplyDeleteHi Ken, it is Jaedun. I liked all your effort and everything you have done. This reminds me of mine. I think you should make sure we can see the writing clearly
ReplyDeleteGood day Ken, I'm Venice.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Jaedun saying that you need to make your text a different text colour for different colours you have. My other opinion is that the make it better part said now make it better. Without the 'now' i woudn't understand. Anyways keep up the good work.