In the book I was reading there was a monster so that is why I had to write a monster story.
This is mine
“Noooooooooo it’s raining and i’m hungry”. I run to my car so I can go home and eat. I put the key in but there was no fuel “I Swear I had fuel? I saw a house “someone there might Give me fuel for my car.” I said.
I knocked on the door it open and no one was there. I walk in and looked left and right “looks like no one’s here”. I look at the door it swing closed I run to the door and tried to open it but it was locked.
It was very dark I saw a flashlight I grab the flashlight and turn it on. I was so scared I heard someone or something in The hallway. I saw a closet I turn the flashlight off and went in the closet.
It was a monster! It has green skin no eyes and it has 4 arms it was blind. I quietly walk out of the closet because I know that monster was blind.
I saw a rock “maybe it move around by sounds?” I Whisper. I grabbed the rock and throw the rock on the other hallway. It looked at the hallway that I threw the rock in. It ran to that hallway and disappeared.
“I need to get out of here!” I turn on the flashlight. I saw a knife “ I will need to get that knife for sure.” I saw a key I grabbed it and it was the key for the door! The door was just they I run as fast as I can I put the key in the keyhole and open the door and they was cars flying.
Hi Ken
ReplyDeleteOK, I'm a little scared!!!!
Your use of great descriptive words and short sentences makes this story quite scary. I'm just glad the torch had working batteries in it. Great thinking to throw the rock down the other corridor to distract the monster.
Remember when you reread your work to watch out for capitals in the middle of sentences.
I'm wondering if there is another chapter still to come? Why are there flying cars?
Look forward to seeing more of your blog posts.