WALT use our sense in our writing to picture in the read's head
Here is an example of my writing can you imagine the scene in your head?
I was slithering around the jungle. It was hot in the jungle then I heard water drops. I climbed on a trunk to have a better view of where the water could be. I finally found water but there was a orange and black, fierce tiger slinking by the water. I thought hard but I could not think of anything to do. I went to look for water again.
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