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Tuesday, 22 May 2018

Painting a picture in the reader's head

WALT use our sense in our writing to picture in the read's head

Here is an example of my writing can you imagine the scene in your head?



I was slithering around the jungle. It was hot in the jungle then I heard water drops. I climbed on a trunk to have a better view of where the water could be. I finally found water but there was a orange and black, fierce tiger slinking by the water. I thought hard but I could not think of anything to do. I went to look for water again.